ARCHITECTURE OF FIRE

Zyphar standing silently beneath a sky breaking into fire

ARCHITECTURE OF FIRE-By this time, Zyphar—still known as Animas—has survived past trials. But now, to honor the Forging Trinity and earn a name of his own, he must face a final enemy—one no Animas has ever conquered. What lies ahead is not a war of blades or strategy. It is the war of temptation, surrender, and the agony of desire that never ends. To pass, he must enter the Garden—and survive Lust.

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This chapter is drawn from Zyphar Chronicles I: The Becoming.


I was surprised to see my masters seated in that narrow, sun-dim room, as if they had been waiting there for me.

I thought perhaps something serious had happened behind the veil, something final—so I stepped forward and asked them plainly. I still believed answers could be found in their stillness.

Am I doing good, my masters?

Did I pass any of it?

This time, they did not raise their voices or avert their eyes.

None of them seemed angry or disappointed.

All three sat in the calmness of inevitability, and there was no thunder in their silence.

Then one of them spoke—not with the force of teaching, but with the weight of truth unshackled from expectation.

“We do not know,” he said.

“The challenges you’ve faced were the deadly sins every Animas must eventually encounter.”

“We were teachers—we are not judges. So we cannot say whether you’ve won or lost. But from all we have seen, and all the ruins we’ve walked among… We can say, no Animas has ever come this far.”

He paused, looked at me like one looks at a comet—

“You earned an honorary title for what you’ve faced till now,” he continued. “But to receive a name of your own—you must take the final test. We warn you: no one has ever defeated it.”

Another master leaned forward slightly, his voice more grounded than usual. “The saints were given immunity to it by the grace of the Lord. The chosen were instructed to avoid it altogether.”

“We will not compel you to take this path. You may walk away whenever you wish, and perhaps in time, the Lord may bestow upon you the grace or wisdom to survive it without facing it directly.”

But I did not come this far to step backward into shelter. I do not want to back off now.

I said that even if it is not a must, I will face it—to honor the efforts of my Masters. All three of them laughed—with something strange and sacred in their expression.

It was the first time I had ever seen such a thing pass between them. And it felt like they were not laughing at my choice, but at the impossible beauty of it.

Without further word, they turned toward the wall behind them, and a door opened with the sound of a wind that had waited too long. Beyond the threshold, I saw a garden.

Not the kind that offers fruit or fragrance, but the kind that tempts a man to forget what he came for.

And as I stepped forward, feeling the breath of it curl around my steps like silk soaked in longing, I heard the fading voice of my masters drifting through the dim:

“It is Lust.”

The garden was the strangest thing I had ever encountered; it was gentle in all the ways that dissolve memory. Each element inside it seemed designed for one purpose only—to make you forget another.

I was standing before a pale white flora, its petals bending toward the air as if in prayer, when suddenly I realized I could no longer recall my name.

Then I moved without knowing, my heart unaware of its own direction, and when my eyes fell upon a quiet lake with silver-green edges, everything I had just seen before was already gone.

I was aware, somehow, that I was forgetting.

That everything behind me was vanishing moment by moment. Yet I remained focused on the present, as if the very structure of the garden demanded my surrender to now.

But some small core in me—whatever remains in a man after the teachers have done their carving—still remembered the last words I heard before I stepped through the door.

I had come here to face the undefeated enemy.

I had come to meet Lust.

I will not describe this part of my journey in full.

It is not necessary. And it is not appropriate—not here, not when I’m seated beside Nimo.  She may take it the wrong way, and this is not the wound I want to reopen before her eyes.

So I will only tell you what happened in shape, not in detail, like the outline of a dream you wake from in sweat.

They all agreed. Nimo gave a gentle nod, so I started sharing the pain I had tried to leave behind.

Lust came not as a threat.

It came as love.

The kind of love I had always imagined but never truly found.

It carried no demand at first.

It told me it had been waiting, nothing more. And I believed it.

I saw in it everything I had lost: the quiet care of a mother who once held me like a jewel, the healing touch that could undo years of scar, the companion I had searched for across cities that only offered currency, the friend who would never lie.

The comrade who would fight beside me and fall without fear—and above all, a love that wrapped both body and mind in the kind of safety that felt holy.

I stayed. Longer than I ever had in the City of Smoke and Mirrors.

I remember thinking, vaguely, that I may have even met someone important there, but could not hold the memory long enough to give it shape. The garden dissolved it each time I tried.

And still I stayed. Because in that love, there was no need left unanswered. It was only much later, when time had ceased to mean anything and surrender had become indistinguishable from peace, that things began to shift.

The love I had known—soft, boundless, infinite—began making requests. Small ones at first. Harmless things.

Then slowly, over weeks or years or centuries—I could not tell which—those requests became needs, and those needs became terms, and one morning, I realized I was being given conditions.

It was then that I saw the truth. It had never been love.

It had always been Lust.

But even then, knowing what I now knew, I could not fight it.

I couldn’t speak against it. I couldn’t even lift a finger to name it for what it was. It had taken its true form at last, and what I saw was ruthless. Divine in its cruelty.

It was so powerful that I thought, for a moment, that even the Lord himself might not have the strength to destroy it.

It wrapped a golden chain around my throat—made of devotion, of a thousand promises once kept—and began to drag me somewhere deeper than the garden.

I could feel my body shatter.

My limbs were splitting with pressure.

I was being pulled across the sharp ground like a broken offering. I managed, with what voice I had left, to ask it where we were going.

It smiled.

And the sky broke open at the sound of that smile.

Then it spoke.

“I’m taking you home,” it said.

“To Hell.”

I was dragged so fast that I lost the thread of time, and when I finally woke—I was inside—the raw center of it—the place they dared only name from a distance.

I had entered Hell, and it had not waited to announce itself.

The ground beneath me was not made of soil or ash, but of flesh—stretched skin pulled tight over twisted bone, veined and blistered, breathing beneath my weight like something trying not to scream.

Some sections of it flamed openly, glowing red and orange with furnace-like heat; others shimmered with a strange, beautiful blue, cool to the eye but when touched, they burned so deeply I felt pain not only in the body but somewhere beneath memory.

I tried to step forward.

And my feet melted.

Not as a dream but in reality.

The flesh liquified, tendon peeled off like ribbons, muscle slithered downward in oily strands, and bones cracked with a quiet groan.

I collapsed, not out of weakness but because there was no longer anything to stand on. And I screamed—not because I chose to, but because the pain found its own mouth in me.

I didn’t die.

I watched my body burn away, part by part, until there was only smoke—and when there was nothing left to scream with, I came back. Fully formed.

Nerves fresh, skin reborn, bones restored with meticulous detail, as if the fire had memorized exactly how I once was just to make me that way again for the next round.

The second time, the fire didn’t come immediately.

It let me walk.

Let me breathe.

Gave me space to believe I had adapted.

Then it rose—sharper, cleaner, more patient.

It met me with my own tolerance. That was its secret.

Hell wasn’t built to kill you.

It was built to teach you how to suffer better.

Each time I was consumed, I returned not numb—but more precise in my pain. I began to recognize shades of agony I hadn’t believed were real.

Skin burned.

Muscle melted.

And the pain stayed—long after even the ash was gone.

I knew what it meant to suffer in absence, to feel a wound in places where flesh no longer existed. And still—at the very heart of it—there it was.

Lust.

Not seductive or monstrous.

It was in smooth skin untouched by fire, clear eyes that reflected no pity, and a calm voice that made the inferno around it feel like background music.

It sat on a throne made of something I couldn’t name, watching me like a sculptor judging clay—curious, and deeply invested in the shape of my destruction.

At times, it spoke—not to me, but to the creature beside it, a thing wrapped in chains woven from screaming mouths, each link biting the next like cannibal scripture.

“He’s not learning yet,” it said once, tilting its head slightly, almost amused.

The chained creature hissed. Then Lust spoke again.

“Try the internal melt next. Invert the nerve sequence.”

“Let him feel it backwards.”

They laughed together—not loudly, just enough to let me know I was not dying fast enough for their taste.

Then the fire entered from within.

My stomach boiled, then my spine curled like paper folding into flame. The lungs caved in.

My eyes didn’t burn from outside—they ignited from the optic nerve, forcing me to watch myself implode.

I screamed in voices I had never used before, voices that didn’t belong to my throat, and the pain evolved—it didn’t just intensify, it grew intelligent, began experimenting.

And I begged—not to survive, not to die, but simply to stop feeling. But here, that’s the one mercy you’re never allowed.

Lust never lifted a hand.

Never shouted.

It simply observed, measured, and adjusted—like a god of hunger whose altar is built from sensation itself.

Each return brought with it no victory—only greater sensitivity.

Each resurrection was not a reset—it was an upgrade in suffering.

That’s the punishment.

You used others like fire.

Now you are the fuel.

There was no sunrise, no dusk, no shadow turning into night.
Only the same burning.

The same searing disintegration of flesh and bone stretched across eternity, until eternity itself began to feel like a joke whispered by the ones who designed this place.

Time did not pass—it dissolved, became another form of heat, another trick of suffering.

There were no hours, no seasons, no moment of relief—not even illusion. Only an unbroken ritual of melting—flesh to vapor, vapor to memory, memory to pain—until pain was the only name I had left.

The hell executioners stood in half-forms, faceless but not voiceless, laughing with mouths that looked like cracks in a furnace wall, their teeth stained with history.

One of them turned toward me, voice echoing like it came from behind the bone of my own skull.

“You can pray,” it said. “To any god you remember. To any lord you once feared. We don’t mind.”

Another leaned close enough for its heat to singe thought.

“You can call for help. Call everyone.”

“The saints, the prophets, the chosen. No one’s coming.”

The third one, cloaked in chains that writhed like veins, grinned wide. “And there is no end. This is it.”

I didn’t respond.

Because I knew they weren’t lying.

I could feel the truth in their words—not spoken truth, but the kind you inhale when your lungs have already forgotten the taste of air.

I gave up hope.

Not in despair—but in surrender.

Surrender to the new religion of pain.

There was no use resisting.

I stopped pleading.

Stopped thinking.

I simply burned.

As they wanted.

As I was meant to.



If this story stirred something in you—if the silence and the fire felt like they were yours too—you’re invited to continue the journey. The next chapter awaits on the website, titled Your Lord Heard That You Cried.

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In the Zyphar Chronicles, readers descend into a harrowing realm of spiritual trials and epic inner conflict, where every step is a battle for the survival of the soul. Blending psychological fantasy with raw realism, the writing offers perhaps the most realistic description of hell—not just as a place, but as a state of mind. Through temptation and testing, lust as illusion, and the brutal clarity of suffering as initiation, Zyphar guides us into entering hell not to escape, but to confront what lives beneath. Each line is a mirror. Every descent is a deeper truth.

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